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Artist's Comments

regrets, regrets, regrets.

Model: Sophia
Make up: Sophia and I
Photography, direction and post editing by me, Jiani Lu.
My work may not be used or altered without my written consent. Thanks =]

Critiques


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Now this is what I call purity! The scene, the lights, and the model are all crating this sense of wonderful (I don't know how to write what I see in words exactly but you know what I mean :P)

I love how you managed to set the mood of the photo as if it was winter. I really can sense it was a cold morning. I also love how the model is posing, also adds more sensual beauty to the photo. The way she's looking indicates innocent and I might tell that she's thinking of someone, or maybe not. :B

But if you manage to blur or soften the skin (especially her face) I wish you didn't over soften it. I think if you have done a little re-touch on her face without soften it would appear better, but the overall outcome is simply BEAUTIFUL!
Great job. :)
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This portrait definitely looks like something that I would see on display in a shopping mall store or on the pages of a magazine. It has a very high-fashion feel to it, yet it's also soft and in a natural setting, as evident by the trees surrounding the model. The lighting is very dream-like and beautiful, and the look on her face along with the strand of hair in front of it makes it feel real and not over-processed. She appears to be having a contemplative moment, which is another reason why this would work well for commercial purposes: When stop and go "hmm" at a photo, they'll usually notice what you're trying to sell, too :D

If any of that made sense...but it's great!
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:iconcarloskhu:
:heart: nice

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:iconfemketje:
pretty!

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:icondennischunga:
well done - i love it

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:iconpablitocastillo5:
I like it!:D
What did you use to edit it?
:iconcodeaires:
Gorgeous :D

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:iconuskummel:
beautiful, very well done :)
:iconanalemmatic:
This is brilliant.
I love the lighting and contrast.
Make's this photo stand out great.
Well done!
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i know it is a stupid mistake. -_-.

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:iconausuta:
<3

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mmmm ullarsokkar......

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Apr 25, 2009, 12:55:02 PM

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