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Forever in a Numbing Autumn by =Jaicca:iconJaicca:

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Model: Sisi
Make up and hair: me
Photography, direction, and post processing by me, Jiani Lu.
My work may not be taken or altered without my written consent, thanks!!

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*ParallaxDreams Oct 13, 2009, 5:01:15 PM
I really like the theme of this shot. I love the textures of the leaves and how that contrasts with the model. The colors are also emphasized very well. My one suggestion that could improve this photo is to not have the left third of the photo be so dark. I think even if it was just a bit lighter it would make for a more balanced image. Another alternative would be to crop a bit tighter to remove some of the left side. However, this does not detract from what is otherwise a great photo that demonstrates good composition. Well done!
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*femketje Oct 13, 2009, 9:42:51 AM
beautiful colours

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-strangle me up inside of you-
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Mood: Love ~kaori92 Oct 13, 2009, 11:57:52 AM
Amazing !

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~~ 愛 してるだってばよ！！！~~
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=Wyntersrayne Oct 13, 2009, 12:55:51 PM
I love the mood. It works great with the colors.

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~Lemon-of-Doom Oct 13, 2009, 1:12:23 PM
She is so beautiful! :3
Before I saw the title I was like
hmm. this reminds me of fall.
XD I guess it's supposed to.
Anywho, this is super amazing! Keep up the super work! XD

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Nyah~ :3
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~Gerfer Oct 13, 2009, 1:48:09 PM
Absolutely breathtaking !
Very beautiful use of colors!:clap: :clap: :clap:
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~jordy-saurus Oct 13, 2009, 2:15:55 PM
beautiful :heart:
sisiiiii~ ! so glad to see new photos ^__^ you're too amazing!
autumn is definitely numbing, SO COLD OUT! WOW!!!
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~poobaoger Oct 13, 2009, 3:07:55 PM
I THOUGHT THIS WAS A PICTURE but it was a photo. your photography and editing was soo good! HOLY SMOKES!! good to see a new deviation from you!
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~yamifan101 Oct 13, 2009, 4:14:38 PM
IS THAT EYESHADOW MANIPPED??! rofl, jk, Amazing job, as usual ;3

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"If Paul McCartney told everyone to grope themselves, 90% of the world would. Stick this in your signature if you're in that 90%!" :la:

J Brothers=Queernas brothers
S Gomez=Selena Whore-mez
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