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August 10, 2010
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Aug 9, 2010, 2:52:59 PM
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:iconjaicca:
..but not my story.

Thanks Sharon for snapping this of me =]
Modeling, wardrobe, styling, direction and post processing by me, Jiani Lu.

My work may not be taken or altered without my written consent, thanks :D
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I hope you don't take this offensively, but it's my true opinion.

I really like this picture, from the styling, to the background to the lighting. Almost everything actually. But the model's face is too harsh. It's distracting. I also don't think it fits with the mood of the picture itself. The colours are more on the matted side, with beiges and whites and browns giving off a relax, simple look. There are flowers and woody tones. I'm not saying you're face is ugly, ( you're a pretty girl! :> ) it just stands out too much. It almost gives off an angry feel, which the rest of the photo does not. I'm guessing you were trying to go for the forlorn, looking out towards nowhere kinda thing, which is great. But it's not there yet.

The only reason why I'm being so nit-picky with details is cause this is so close to perfection! I do enjoy your work so I hope you can take my consent seriously. So relax those face muscles up a bit! XD

I really hope I'm not sounding like a jerk. I really enjoy your work. and I talk too much. Sorry.
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~Jaicca Aug 10, 2010  Student General Artist
Aww don't feel sorry, I'm really grateful that you took the time to analyze my work in such detail. I'm glad you're being truthful about it =D
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~RyanRichardCarr Aug 10, 2010  Professional Interface Designer
so~ fresh
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~evelyn-stormcraft Aug 10, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
The picture alone tells a story - or the first chapter, at least. Everything in the shot looks disheveled in some way, creating a sort of microcosm within the scene. Very well done; kudos to both you and Sharon.
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~Jaicca Aug 10, 2010  Student General Artist
Thanks for the support, Derek :hug:
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Mood: Joy ~Kaitluuuh Aug 10, 2010  Hobbyist Photographer
I love the picture, but it's even better when the titles give it a whole new story! Great job!
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~TimmyJan Aug 10, 2010  Hobbyist Photographer
sweet stuff very nice. very moodelicious
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~frankhong Aug 10, 2010  Professional Digital Artist
nice shot!
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:iconshamziel:
Beautiful! Where is this?
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~Jaicca Aug 10, 2010  Student General Artist
We went to Old Town downtown Toronto =D
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