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I really like this picture, from the styling, to the background to the lighting. Almost everything actually. But the model's face is too harsh. It's distracting. I also don't think it fits with the mood of the picture itself. The colours are more on the matted side, with beiges and whites and browns giving off a relax, simple look. There are flowers and woody tones. I'm not saying you're face is ugly, ( you're a pretty girl! :> ) it just stands out too much. It almost gives off an angry feel, which the rest of the photo does not. I'm guessing you were trying to go for the forlorn, looking out towards nowhere kinda thing, which is great. But it's not there yet.
The only reason why I'm being so nit-picky with details is cause this is so close to perfection! I do enjoy your work so I hope you can take my consent seriously. So relax those face muscles up a bit! XD
I really hope I'm not sounding like a jerk. I really enjoy your work. and I talk too much. Sorry.