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Why did you go for the portrait orientation of your camera here? There is a little sky above the body, but the body is mostly centred in the image. Either go all the way and put the body smack at the bottom of the image with a metric ton of sky above it, or cut it all, go in closer and closer and take a nice close-up with only the important parts there.
Also your colours still seem off, and as such they are not helping your image. May I suggest moving to black and white for a while?
i have a friend that remind me of her.